๐ Original Content (English)
Instructions:ย as we read today's poems, highlight/underline specific words, phrases, descriptions, figures of speech, etc., that reveal the speaker's tone (attitude) toward their subject (what they are writing about).
The speaker's tone in this poem isโฆ | #1Joyful | #2 Defiant |
The speaker's tone in this poem isโฆ |
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The speaker's tone in this poem isโฆ |
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Response Question:ย which of today's poems was your favorite, and why?Be specific.ย How would Ha (from Inside Out & Back Again) feel about this poem, and why?Explain. |
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>> OPTION #1: TONE ANALYSIS
Tone Analysis Paragraph(ClEvR)
"In the poem '_______________________________'ย by __________________________ , the author creates a _____________________tone."
"For example, in the poem _(specific words/phrases/descriptions/images/figures of speech that create that tone)_ ."
"These details help create a _______________ tone by/because _____________________________________________________________ ." |
Response:(how does the speaker feel about their subject, and how can you tell?ย 3 sentences minimum)
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>> OPTION #2: CREATIVE WRITING
ASSIGNMENT: using today's texts as a model, write a "copy/change" poem that describesโฆ
โขThe diversity of the different people/groups in America (e.g. "I Hear America Singing")
โขHow you feel about your place in the world now, and what you hope your place in the world will be in the future (e.g. "I, Too")
โขThe most serious problem(s) facing America today, and how America is dealing with (or failing to deal with) those issues (e.g. "The United States of Anxiety")
โขYour (potentially complex/mixed) feelings about America using an extended comparison to a specific object or animal (e.g. "Good Bones")
โขOPTIONAL: write your poem in the style of Inside Out & Back Again (from Ha's perspective/point of view).
Your poem should use specific word choices,descriptions, figures of speech, etc., to communicate a CLEAR TONE(how your speaker feels about the subject of your poem), and should be at least 12 lines in length.
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๐จ๐ณ ็ฟป่ฏๅ ๅฎน (Chinese)
่ฏดๆ๏ผๅจ้ ่ฏปไปๅคฉ็่ฏๆญๆถ๏ผ่ฏท้ซไบฎ/ไธๅ็บฟๆ ๅบ่ฝๆญ็คบ่ฏด่ฏ่ ๅฏนๅ ถไธป้ข๏ผไปไปฌๆๅ็ๅ ๅฎน๏ผ็่ฏญๆฐ๏ผๆๅบฆ๏ผ็ๅ ทไฝ่ฏ่ฏญใ็ญ่ฏญใๆ่ฟฐใไฟฎ่พๆๆณ็ญใ
่ฟ้ฆ่ฏไธญ่ฏด่ฏ่ ็่ฏญๆฐๆฏโฆโฆ | #1 ๆๆฆ็ | #2 ๆๆ็ |
่ฟ้ฆ่ฏไธญ่ฏด่ฏ่ ็่ฏญๆฐๆฏโฆโฆ |
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่ฟ้ฆ่ฏไธญ่ฏด่ฏ่ ็่ฏญๆฐๆฏโฆโฆ |
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ๅ็ญ้ฎ้ข๏ผไฝ ๆๅๆฌขไปๅคฉ็ๅช้ฆ่ฏ๏ผไธบไปไน๏ผ่ฏทๅ ทไฝ่ฏดๆใHa๏ผๆฅ่ชใ็ฑๅ ่ๅค๏ผๅ่ๅฝๆฅใ๏ผไผๅฏน่ฟ้ฆ่ฏๆไฝๆๅ๏ผไธบไปไน๏ผ่ฏท่งฃ้ใ |
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>> ้้กน #1: ่ฏญๆฐๅๆ
่ฏญๆฐๅๆๆฎต่ฝ (ClEvR)
"ๅจ่ฏๆญใ_______________________________ใไธญ๏ผไฝ่ __________________________ ่ฅ้ ไบไธ็ง_____________________็่ฏญๆฐใ"
"ไพๅฆ๏ผๅจ่ฏๆญไธญ _๏ผๅ้ ่ฏฅ่ฏญๆฐ็ๅ ทไฝ่ฏ่ฏญ/็ญ่ฏญ/ๆ่ฟฐ/ๆ่ฑก/ไฟฎ่พๆๆณ๏ผ_ ใ"
"่ฟไบ็ป่้่ฟ/ๅ ไธบ_____________________________________________________________ ๅธฎๅฉ่ฅ้ ไบไธ็ง_______________็่ฏญๆฐใ" |
ๅๅบ๏ผ๏ผ่ฏด่ฏ่ ๅฏนๅ ถไธป้ขๆไฝๆๅ๏ผไฝ ๆฏๅฆไฝๅคๆญ็๏ผ่ณๅฐ3ๅฅ่ฏ๏ผ
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>> ้้กน #2: ๅๆๅไฝ
ไฝไธ๏ผไปฅไปๅคฉ็ๆๆฌไธบ่ๆฌ๏ผๅไธ้ฆโๅคๅถ/ๆน็ผโ่ฏๆญ๏ผๆ่ฟฐโฆโฆ
โข ็พๅฝไธๅไบบ็พค/็พคไฝ็ๅคๆ ทๆง๏ผไพๅฆ๏ผใๆๅฌ่ง็พๅฝๅจๆญๅฑใ๏ผ
โข ไฝ ็ฐๅจๅฏน่ชๅทฑๅจไธ็ไธ็ไฝ็ฝฎๆไฝๆๅ๏ผไปฅๅไฝ ๅธๆๆชๆฅ่ชๅทฑๅจไธ็ไธ็ไฝ็ฝฎไผๆฏๆๆ ท๏ผไพๅฆ๏ผใๆไนไธๆ ทใ๏ผ
โข ๅฝไป็พๅฝ้ขไธด็ๆไธฅ้้ฎ้ข๏ผไปฅๅ็พๅฝๅฆไฝๅบๅฏน๏ผๆๆช่ฝๅบๅฏน๏ผ่ฟไบ้ฎ้ข๏ผไพๅฆ๏ผใ็ฆ่็็พๅฝใ๏ผ
โข ไฝ ๅฏน็พๅฝ๏ผๅฏ่ฝๅคๆ/ๆททๆ็๏ผๆๅ๏ผ้่ฟไธ็นๅฎ็ฉไฝๆๅจ็ฉ็ๆฉๅฑๆฏ่พๆฅ่กจ่พพ๏ผไพๅฆ๏ผใๅฅฝ้ชจๅคดใ๏ผ
โข ๅฏ้๏ผไปฅใ็ฑๅ ่ๅค๏ผๅ่ๅฝๆฅใ็้ฃๆ ผ๏ผไปHa็่ง่ง/่ง็น๏ผๅไฝไฝ ็่ฏๆญใ
ไฝ ็่ฏๆญๅบไฝฟ็จๅ ทไฝ็่ฏ่ฏญ้ๆฉใๆ่ฟฐใไฟฎ่พๆๆณ็ญ๏ผไปฅไผ ่พพๆธ ๆฐ็่ฏญๆฐ๏ผไฝ ็่ฏด่ฏ่ ๅฏน่ฏๆญไธป้ข็ๆๅ๏ผ๏ผๅนถไธ้ฟๅบฆๅบ่ณๅฐไธบ12่กใ
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